Lifeforce is, in my opinion, one of the most underrated science-fiction movies to come out of at least the 1980s. Based on a book by British novelist Colin Wilson, titled The Space Vampires, this 1985 movie exudes a multitude of themes from police drama to Gothic fantasy and from sci-fi to old school practical horror. While unfocused in many respects, it was also a fountain of fresh ideas at the time and one of the movies that keep inspiring me. I'm a fan of Lovecraft's cosmic horror and, while I admit I never read the book, I do know there isn't much of it in the movie, but little there is has a lot of potential. I wanted to see that in a sequel, but there never came one. Maybe for the best.
On that note, please keep in mind that this opening script is purely a passionate work of fan-fiction and in no way intended for production or meant to infringe on any copyright rules. That being said, please enjoy! I am open to criticism and I strive to learn.
FADE
IN:
EXT.
SPACE. DARKNESS - CONTINUOUS
There's
breathing, slow, yet even and calculated.
He sounds trapped, as if he's suffocating in a claustrophobic
coffin. The camera floats to the side revealing just a few stars in
the vast distance and pans even further to reveal a few white shapes
flying in formation under the cover of the pitch black void. Least
they know they're not as hidden as they think. The CAMERA
ACCELERATES towards them aggressively and
frames them, intrigued by the unwelcome intruders.
They are humans, heavily armed and wearing white armor suits, their
faces covered with reflective visors that
show the giant shape of a derelict alien ship.
The
focus is on the man leading the team, his slow breath still
dominating the sound, but also a faint beating of his heart can
be distinguished. He wields a long
weapon that looks akin
to a halberd. Following him are two
female and two male. One of the females has a
black cross painted on her chest and another golden cross on the
stock of her weapon. The other woman has a mysterious circle
device on her back and she
seems more nimble in her movement than all
other. The two men each carry bulky weapons, one
holding it tight to his torso, the other has it attached horizontally
to his back as he controls a drone,
constantly scanning its surroundings. It probably knows they're being
watched, but doesn't seem concerned. Far
behind them, a ship is waiting on standby.
ARTHUR
Hold position!
They
use the reaction control thrusters of their suits to delay contact
until further instructions.
He
approaches the giant spaceship that looks like a mold-infested
dandelion. His mirror mask turns translucent, revealing a bearded man
with kind eyes, the eyes of a former priest who lost any chance of
atonement. He makes contact, his feet touch the eerily organic
surface of the ship. He stumbles, but his thrusters regain his
balance.
ARTHUR
Be careful. The surface is not
metallic. Prepare your STS for touchdown.
The
group lands on the hull, not very gracefully. Some
strike a knee pose and quickly readjust. The thrusters on their suits
are constantly engaged. This is but a respite.
Their
visors become transparent, one by one unveiling their faces, except
for the man handling the drone. He seems comfortable with the visor
shut.
FLASH
88 miles to the entrance. Damn!
Everyone's
voice other than Arthur's is over radio, as we are focusing on his point
of view for this scene.
They
move cautiously onward, risks notwithstanding. Beasts could
jump out at any moment.
The
woman with the crosses recites a prayer in silence. Her skin is pale,
her scars are old. She keeps her pious eyes darting over the barrel
of the weapon pointed towards the distant path ahead.
MARY
(faintly as the CAMERA
SWOOPS by)
Deliver me from evildoers and
save me from those who are after my blood.
ARTHUR
Lance, are you
still with us, brother?
LANCE (O.S.)
Yes, sir. I'm
always listening. The signal holds strong
for now. How's it looking over there?
ARTHUR
Grim, just as you described it.
The hull feels... fleshy, as if the whole damned thing is alive. I've
never seen anything so strange.
LANCE (O.S.)
It only gets stranger inside. So
you know, I'm not comfortable leaving you on this mission alone.
FLASH
It's dreadful enough without you
here, brother.
ARTHUR
Don't worry, Lance, we're made
for this.
LANCE (O.S.)
Take good care of TOR and be sure
to keep Gwen safe at all costs.
GWEN
Be safe too, brother.
MARY
What about me?
LANCE (O.S.)
No evil can touch you, Mary. That
I promise. I'll jump in when the time comes.
Arthur
turns around to face their ship while the rest continue ahead passing
him on each side.
ARTHUR
Stay in orbit and guide us
through this cursed placed. Have a little faith in us, will you?!
LANCE (O.S.)
Sure have, commander. I'm
bringing MINERVA closer if TOR's signal fades. Good luck!
ARTHUR
(as he turns to his team)
Make no mistake, soldiers, this
is our doom, one way or another. Hell awaits us and we've come to
slaughter its demons. We carry vengeance in our spirit. Let's give it
to them if that's what they want.
Break off on me.
Arthur
jumps and uses his thrusters to propel ahead of his team. They follow
one by one in the same manner, flying parallel to the ship's outer
hull.
Suddenly,
the CAMERA RACES to the front of the ship as the LIFEFORCE theme
begins playing and the title card appears on screen. We are taken on
a ride through the intricate design of the giant alien vessel as a
foreshadowing of what to expect. Finally, we reach a large room with
three crystals in the middle that encapsulate naked humanoids. We
continue slower towards a woman in the center and just as we close up
on her face, she opens her eyes.
...
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